As going out from my hometown,Nevsehir,and seeing different places,i have a chance to see how Nevsehir is similar or different from that places which i visit.Since from now on,i live in Denizli mostly, i always compare it to Nevsehir,so I can easily say that altough they have a lot of common points at the first sight,they differ in some points,that is, they are both similar and different.
There are many reason why Nevsehir seems like Denizli.Firstly, both of them are small cities and are not crowded so much;thus,in both cities you can easily listen yourself and relax.Secaondly,both of them have a reminder name,that is, when you hear something about Nevsehir,you come up with Cappodocia immediately,because fairy chimneys are in Nevsehir and when hear Denizli,you remind its textile.Thirdly,Both of them have fresh air thanks to their clear atmosphere;while Denizli gets it with its huge green montains,Nevsehir gains it since it hasn't got so many factory and heavy traffic.As you see they are very similar, both of them are attractive for me to live.
Despite of their similarities ,these cities are different from each other to some extent.First of all,their daily life is different because Denizli is a Mediterranean city and its weather conditions are different and because of this,people of Denizli more relax than Nevsehir's people.What i want to say is that people's mood during day time changes.Then,from attractiveness aspect,altough they are both attractive but,in my opinion,Nevsehir is more attractive than Denizli,because Nevsehir is a touristic place and attracts many tourist both native and foreign.Even if they are different,both of them provide me unforgettable experiences in my life.
Consequently,As living in both cities,i like them very much and they are my favorite places to live which i never say "no!", so both of them are unique and indispensable for me.
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with examples and clear sentences ı think your essay can be good to excited me about nevşehir no matter how your compration between denizli and nevşehir is not compeletely true.ı think when you write an essay you must delete from your mind your emotional missing hometown but ı can say that it near perfect thank you too much
ReplyDeletehi döndü,
ReplyDeletebody paragraphs are really good. It effect me. I like them. Actually, there aren't many things which are said. It's nearly perfect.
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ReplyDeleteYour essay is very good.Your descriptions and examples are good and effective.Now i can see differences and similarities between denizli and nevşehir.I like your essay.Nice writing döndü thank you very much
Hi my dear.it is good essayUnfortunately there arent many descriptions.You could have used adjectives adverbs and more information about two places.
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ReplyDeletehi honey :) you have used conjunctions very well..your body paragraphs are really good.you have explained differences and smilarities in a good way but you can make it better by adding some more information ;) kiss you baby :)
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