When you think general landscape of Turkey,you can see Blacksea Region has plenty of green areas than others.Thanks to my sister's engagement,I had a chance to see marvelous landscape of Tokat.It is small city but has both natural and artificial beatuies.
Tokat gains its natural beatuies from its green areas.This is usual for those people living there but as for me,it is unbelievably exiciting beause I haven't seen such green areas that it seems vast.Furthermore,when you look to Niksar from high point,you feel as if you were flying and charmed by its influences on you.Other beauty is the Cave of Ballıca.In order to enter the Cave,you must climb a lot of steps then you go inside of it.While going,you pass snake_like long ways.If i am not wrong,its dept is about 95 meters.Both side of and its hill have different shapes like icy cistern but it is made up of stone and its surfaces are always wet because of its atmosphere.While walking, you feel as if you were in unusual distant places from the world because its cosy atmosphere and comfortable affects make you relax.After go out,you encounter other unbelievable landscape: its natural location and you are again charmed by fresh air provided by huge green mountains which sorround the Cave.
To sum up,you can travel many attractive places for holiday,moreover,Tokat is not in your plan,as it is not near of any sea;nevertheless,these natural beatuies shouldn't be ignored and absolutely a person ought to see once in his/her life so that it adds something which is not wortless for life.
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hi döndü I think you could use more descriptive to tell your essay it would be more attractive and colorful,but you didnt use.you should improve body part.
ReplyDeletehelloo döndü:) ı liked you essay.carry on:)
ReplyDeleteDondu,
ReplyDeleteWhy don't you improve the essay by correctiing spelling and grammatical errors and also including more description of the place? Watch out the points I higlight in the text.
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"When you think??? general landscape of Turkey,you can see Blacksea Region has plenty of green areas than others.Thanks to my sister's engagement,I had a chance to see marvelous landscape of Tokat.It is ???small city but has both natural and artificial beatuies.???
Tokat gains its natural beatuies??? from its green areas.This is usual for those people living there but as??? for me,it is unbelievably exiciting beause I haven't??? seen such green areas that it seems vast.Furthermore,when you look to??? Niksar from high point,you feel as if you were flying and charmed by its influences on you.Other beauty is the Cave of Ballıca.In order to enter the Cave,you must climb a lot of steps then you go inside of it.While going,you pass ???snake_like long ways.If i am not wrong,its dept is about 95 meters.Both side??? of and its hill have different shapes like icy cistern but it is made up of stone and its surfaces are always wet because of its atmosphere.While walking, you feel as if you were in unusual distant places from the world because its cosy atmosphere and comfortable affects??? make you relax???.After ???go out,you encounter other unbelievable landscape: its natural location and you are again charmed by fresh air provided by huge green mountains which sorround the Cave.
To sum up,you can travel many attractive places for holiday,moreover,Tokat is not in your plan,as it is not near of??? any sea;nevertheless,these natural beatuies??? shouldn't be ignored and absolutely a person ought to see once in his/her life so that it adds something which is not wortless for life. "
Hi Döndü,
ReplyDeleteI like your essay but i think you can improve it.Especially introduction is very short. You can write longer than this. In addition, There are some grammatical mistakes. I believe that you can write better than this.:)
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hidöndü
ReplyDeletel think you have the writing abilities.you are doing good but important one is being betteri so lhave some advices for you.for a better essay you need to be careful about your grammar and spelling knowledge
hi döndü,
ReplyDeleteyour essay's content is reaaly good but ı agree with my teacher and friends you can correct your grammar mistakes and ı realized there are some spelling mistakes such as affects and Both side must be corrected.see you friend:)