Altough almost every country in Turkey has subtructure, Nevsehir’s substructure problem hasn’t been solved yet. As we all know that substructure is the main need of a country. It is also clear that defiency of it can cause many problems both physical and moral in people’s
life.
First of all, let’s think for a while... what happens, if it rains heavily? It is easy to answer: flood. Many people’s house are full of water and many things of house’s are destroyed by the flood. Not only the houses but also offices, markets and cafes are also damaged. As people’s life environments are damaged, they can’t go on their normal life. Furthermore, many creatures such as birds, dogs and cats are also damaged besides people. So, we can say that defiency of subtructure can cause the life paralyzed.
After flood, water can’t be absorbed by the ground. This becomes one the most important reason of growing bacteria in the area. As bacteria grow, many contagious illnesses appear. That’s why many people get sick after the flood. Again we can say that subtructure problem can
damage many people’s health.
Briefly, defiency of subtructure are the main cause of many unwanted situation which effect people and other creatures directly. As I said, firstly it causes people’s life condition and then bacteria which people make sick.
Sunday, December 19, 2010
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hi döndü,
ReplyDeleteI have just read your essay.I can say that i couldnt find any gramatical mistake but i am not sure.Your essay's subject is good and also your sentences are wellbuilt.In conclusion your writing short but effective(it is my opinion).Nice job!well done friend.
Hi Döndü:
ReplyDeleteI like your essay.You wrote it in a clear way.Content and organization are good.There are some mistakes such as "Many people’s house are" , "which effect people","then bacteria which people make sick."Anyway thanks for writing such an important problem in our country.
Except for the first sentence you have no grammatical mistake. I like your essay. you explained really important issue. I hope the world will be better than today.. great job my friend well done :)
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